Mondays Finish the Story
A writing challenge from Barbara Beacham that supplies the first sentence and a photo prompt. Write the story with 100-150 words not including the sentence provided.
Here is the photo and my story - Word Count 130:
Not To Worry
Arriving at the beach, she reflected on her life.
True, it hadn't been too wonderful lately, but on the whole
she was happy. Her children were adults, living on their own.
The little problem with her husband and his side dish had
been difficult. She hadn't seen it coming. But she wasn't about to let some
home-wrecker steal everything they'd built up together in a messy divorce.
She smiled as she listened to the surf. Too bad about the
accident. They say it was alcohol and drugs.
After the funeral, she'd taken her devastated husband out
here to recuperate. Poor thing. He was inconsolable. It would be a shame if he
tried anything foolish. What he needed was a good drink.
She smiled again, looked out at the blue water, and cradled
the bag of pills in her pocket.
Oh my goodness but something is about to happen. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteOh yes. Something is definitely about to happen. Thank you.
DeleteI had a lovely comment written and the whole thing disappeared when I signed in to my google account... :( I enjoyed the story and want to read more! So, what happens next? Thanks for writing again for the Mondays Finish the Story challenge and I hope that you return! Be well... ^..^
ReplyDeleteDon't you hate when that happens. I never remember the great comment I'd planned. Thanks for trying once more, and thanks for hosting this challenge.
DeleteI enjoyed this sweet revenge story. The writing is definitely tight. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Lisa. I always like a little revenge. Loved your take on the prompt.
DeleteGreat story, Margo! Keep 'em coming!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Dianne. I'm enjoying the challenge.
DeleteOh yes revenge is sweet.
ReplyDeleteIt is. It is. Thanks for the comment.
DeleteA story that warms the embers that glow ever hotter ~
ReplyDeleteFrom the comments, it looks like a lot of people have revenge in their heart.
DeleteHell hath no fury... Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThank you. You're so right. Women have patience and long memories.
DeleteNice idea! Nicely done story on a familiar plot.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I'm afraid my mind tends toward the dark side.
DeleteI loved "husband and his side dish" :-)
ReplyDeleteYour protagonist sounds almost as bad as mine! She'll do anything to hold on to what's hers.
Oh yeah. She's very possessive.
DeleteNothing more dangerous than a woman scorned!!! Great story!!
ReplyDeleteWomen can be so dangerous. Thanks.
DeleteWow. This is awesome! Loved how it ended. LOL
ReplyDeleteShe's definitely a vengeful person.
DeleteThis woman seems to be someone who's dangerous to wrong. Bodies will be accumulating around her. Well done, Margo. :) --- Suzanne
ReplyDeleteSnot a forgiving bone in her body.
DeleteI like that this peaceful photo inspired this story from you, Margo! She's not someone to mess with!
ReplyDeleteForgiveness doesn't seem to be in her vocabulary.
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