Two and
a half years ago, I decided to write a mystery. Since that time, the learning
process seems endless. First, I discovered the dreaded back story. My beginning chapters were full of all the information
I deemed important about my characters, story, etc. It had to go. I worked
through the painful process of cutting away my much loved prose, and
substituted words that would hook my reader.
Then, I hit
the “Show, Don’t Tell” axiom. In a
hurry to finish my masterpiece, I found it more expedient to tell the reader the
story. Someone kindly explained to me that the reader wants to be part of the action,
not just an onlooker. Showing involves the reader in the character’s thoughts
and emotions, lets them feel what’s happening. I hate to say it, but I still
have to edit my story with that in mind.
The use
of conflict has also caused me a
great deal of angst. My feelings about conflict? I don’t like it in my life so
why would I want to use it on my poor protagonist? Oh, maybe because it makes
the story? Yes, I have a lot to learn. Again, working through this one daily.
So many
other lessons I’ve received as I go about the business of writing. How did this
wonderful advice come my way? Critique groups, writing conferences, online
blogs, how-to books and online workshops. There are wonderful tools available for
the writer in any genre.
My
journey to authorship began with a few good books (actually, I bought over 20
books before I paid attention to what authors I liked were reading or writing.)
Because I couldn’t wait to get my book written and published, I plunged into
the world of the internet to finish my instruction. (Right! As if I ever
finish.)
My first
online course was good, but
expensive. I’ve since learned that good, inexpensive, online writing workshops
abound. How to find the right one takes time. First, I found a site dedicated
to writers of my genre. Then I paid attention to what other writers had to say
about various workshops and those who taught them. I also learned quite a bit
about good workshops at writing conferences. Ask questions!
Online workshops
come in different sizes: one week, two weeks, one month, etc. Most are
interactive with the instructor giving important feedback to everyone. If you
prefer, you can lurk and profit from the writing advice given to others.
My own
experience has been that the more I put into the workshop, the more I get out
of it. That doesn’t mean that I’ve always participated. Not even close.
However, I have downloaded all the class notes for each workshop. I find that I
can always go back to something I need when it comes up in my writing.
Coming
attractions: The Power of the Right Critique Group, more workshop sites, and
information about the fascinating city of Salem, MA, where Dani’s story takes
place. Oh, and maybe some more ghosts.